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Alone and trapped
In a rusted world
She sits and waits
This porcelain girl

They tiptoe around her
Afraid she might break
Knowing full well
That her life's at stake

They find out her secret
And throw her in a room
So white and padded
To escape her gloom

She still remains silent
A twisted smile on her face
She's been here before,
She remembers this place

Left with only her thoughts
She just sits there and rocks
A broken porcelain girl
In her nice, padded box
Yeah, I wrote this while I was in school. It's soooo easy to zone off and write during the many lectures that we receive there... anyone agree??
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:iconmistress-macabre:
mistress-macabre Nov 7, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
Holy fuck that's wicked. -And I don't say that often.

I love it, really love it.

And the drawing goes well with it, too.

I'm adding this to my faves.

-Keep writing!
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:iconclutchingmycurelp:
ha thanks. yeah, it does have a bit of a wicked side to it. :D


And thanks for the fav!!!!
I will keep writing, just for you! lol :hug:
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:iconmistress-macabre:
mistress-macabre Nov 8, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
:) You're welcome, and I really look forward to more of your work!
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:iconclutchingmycurelp:
:P Ahh thanks. I'll see if I can find some more of my poems!
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:iconmistress-macabre:
mistress-macabre Nov 9, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
:) Awesome
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blondie-kitty Nov 7, 2004   Photographer
I love that!!! That's going on my favourites!!! that issss sooooooo good!!! Your truly AMAZING!!!! :hug:
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:iconclutchingmycurelp:
Awww why thank you ! :hug:
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KnightBlack Nov 6, 2004   Photographer
Now that's a good one.. I think I'll add it to my favorites...
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:iconclutchingmycurelp:
awww thanks!!! Yeah, could you tell that I was really bored that day? :D I write mostly all of my poems in school. Best place to write em, I say.
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:icondemonic-chao:
oh man.. whered u learn to write so good like that?
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